The feedback I received was a big help for me, a lot of points raised I already was aware of, but some was critically constructive. I found that my main problem was my point was not being expressed as clearly as it could, perhaps I could keep the idea but just include more text to clarify what I am trying to inform? Then again I want to keep it nice and simple.
These can be studied and hopefully overcome when I start to deal with my 10 editions of my mail shots.
I aim to clarify my message and render the text, do I also need another image/layout?
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