Sunday, 15 November 2009

Message and Delivery - Group Crit

I had 3 minutes to present my ideas, thought processes of my 10 mail shots. After the 3 minutes I was given 4 feedback sheets from others in my crit group. This feedback was very useful.

Issues Raised:
  • Needs to be seen by people who don't know the real potential of existing young people in todays society. Is just posting it to schools as beneficial to expressing my point, as it could be?
  • How will you seal it?
  • How will I make sure when the envelope is opened, it is not ripped, otherwise that would ruin the poster/image inside before it has even been looked at

Actions to be taken:
  • I think I will now post my mail shots to other places as well as schools. I may look into advertising companies, those who produce posters that are put up in public places, trains, etc... Community centres? Hospitals? Newspaper companies? Journalists?
  • I think I might use a very small amount of spray mount just on the tip of the seal
  • This point raised was very useful as I hadn't thought about it yet, but I am thinking about having on the envelope in small, something along the lines of "open me carefully". Something similar.

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