Tuesday, 19 October 2010

WRAp it up, feedback

In my group I got 11 votes for the category, 'Best use of Type and Image'. The comments I received were:


  • Really nice use of colour, striking imagery
  • Fantastic colour choice, good scale for the poster
  • Great use of colour and stock
  • Colour and stock are visually engaging 
  • Great stock and colour choice, the composition looks good too
  • Very well done
  • Colour looks great on the stock

I am happy with this feedback, the comments I received are complimentary and I did enjoy producing the work. I do like the image&type on the poster and little straw envelope, with the right audience I feel this does have potential to promote a product. For the box, I like how the strip that you rip off to open it, is patterned with strawberries. 
However, I am disappointed in myself for not perhaps using the print&packaging element well enough? I didn't get any votes for 'Best use of packaging nets' and 'Best print considerations'. I know I could've done better. I feel that I spent a lot of time on what I was packaging & why, the design, colours etc... that I abandoned the brief's real intention. I spend too much time thinking about what I could package, I should've chosen a word and an image more chaotically and just had fun with it. 

Some of the final products were very impressive and showed great amounts of creativity.




















more photos uploaded soon